All Comments on 'Milk Sow Ch. 08'

Keep it going!

rather disappointed with the end.

Because of the quality of the writing and the depth of the characters, I find myself torn here. As a guy reading this to get arousal and jack off, it's great, grade A, best thing I've read for a long while. As a reader of stories, I feel upset. I wanted them to resolve their differences, or at least for Ben to own her, not go back to the farm so soon. I wanted there to be more tension in the sale, more pause and more debate. So depending on how I look at the story, my opinion differs.

You are an excellent writer.

It is because you are an excellent writer that I feel really connected to Jenny and Ben. They loved each other.

Now she is a whore. Ever bit of humanity washed out of her. What we came to love about Jenny we loved because she was human. You write wonderfully, and with every word, my heart broke. I will miss Jenny. I miss a woman witht he courage to go for what she wants, only have that courage require her to give up everything, even her very humanity.

I have read the whole set of stories so far. And truthfully i mainly want to punch Ben and take Ginny home. On the other the whole sow idea intrigued me though Ginny's story makes me want to go Rambo style a go place a beat down on a few people. I was aroused but the end didn't do it for me could you make another installment following the story. Also it was a great story but how it ended. Really made me want to punch Ben and go find those farms and take a bunch of those captive women (Sows) home and a few of those machines the newer modified ones.

i really enjoyed the story and thought that ginnysow going back to the farm was exactly the right course. she has been changed and her body was now reacting to that change...Matt had helped mold her and she was who her body, her desires were now for. i hope that you will write at least one more chapter on how she adjusts back at the farm and how she is integrated back in.

I found this story by looking at Feedback Portal comments and I was struck by the comment that I read. This was...very strange, and somehow a bit troubling. A case of "be careful what you wish for?"<br><br>

Of course, this is almost a parable for D/s, the Master/slave. The psychology is good. The entire thing is brought together by the author's attention to detail and the characters' motivations. On top of that, it's simply good writing, well edited, and with timely progression through the story.<br><br>

Great job!