All Comments on 'Millstone - Novel 01 Ch. 16'

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tim23832tim23832over 3 years ago

Read it all, well done. I hope there's more, at least an addendum or postscript about the characters you birthed here.

Page 3 had a little confusion by referring to James, renamed Tucker, but having read all the chapters it wasn't a mystery for long.

Fi I could only find a place like the Minotaur for myself...

MbC56MbC56over 3 years ago

I have read all chapters and enjoyed every single one! I am hoping there will be a followup chapter that lets us know if golden bear is gonna father Winter kids

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Really enjoyed this world you built! I hope you wrote more about all these great characters soon.

Greydude12Greydude12over 3 years ago
Loved it!

I can't wait for the next Milstone novel

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Love, love, loved it!! Excellent writing! Very amused with the "appendage" issues. I wanna move to Franklin and live at the Minotaur!! Very much looking forward to, and very much hoping for, the next investigation!

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 3 years ago

Enjoyed the story and characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Wonderful story! Loved the characters and all the steamy sex.

Can't wait to read more about Mr. Millstone and company.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Best series I've read.

I dont know if you plan on writing another, but I would read it in a heartbeat. 10/10

DV19DV19almost 3 years ago

Excellent story, excellent writing, and very imaginative location.

I'm looking forward to the next Novel..

DV19

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I served in the military, and I’m currently an author. More of my works can be found under my real name, Rick Haydn Horst, at this link: https://www.smashwords.com/profile/view/RickHorst A Note on Star Ratings: I do my best to write great stories with a plot and character dev...

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