All Comments on 'Milwaukee's Finest'

...and well written. It made me remember what sex was like many, many years ago. I particularly liked the author's note - something we frequently forget here (it is why this is fanstasyland here).

Over all very well written, good build up but just seemed to peter out with the lust scene at the end. Perhaps as an old, wringled dude, I've forgotten how quick to young people can enjoy life. Again though, short stories are suppose to be quick and dirty, no pun intened.

Tom