Mind Deviancy Ch. 01 - Release

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A jet of flame shot up from the pages, kissing his cheek with blistering heat. As he fell back, he drew Maddie back with him, toppling into a heap before the rising flame. The fire touched nothing as it inverted to a shadow of pure black. From that shadow, a figure emerged. "Where is that cocksucking fucker?" It was a woman dressed in a Victorian frock coat. Jet black hair slicked back against her head, and her eyes glittered like live beetles rolling on their backs as she scanned the room. The coat hugged a thin figure with a pronounced breast. One hand rested on the coat at the waist button while the other arm hung at her side. The visible hand did not look human. Fingers did not come to rounded tips, but continued on into thin slivers of pure shadow. The woman's eyes fell on Elliot and Maddie. Her scowl turned to a manic grin. "Where's Hugo?"

Elliot tried to answer, but once more his tongue lodged in his mouth. Maddie had no trouble finding hers, "Dead, thirty years."

The woman grinned. "I should expect the woman to have the sense. Sorry darling, but this won't hurt."

Before either human could react, the creatures shadowy fingers slipped into Maddie's head.

***

Elliot tried to scream, but no sound could escape his throat. Maddie hung limp in the air, suspended by the creature's fingers jabbed through flesh and bone into her brain. After a few seconds, Maddie dropped to the ground, and the creature's hand became human. "Oh, that's better," the creature said.

Gently reaching out for Maddie's body, Elliot saw her chest still moving. He looked up at the thing, "What are you?"

"I am Evelyn," she said. "And you're Elliot, not Hugo. I forget humans aren't that spongy. Once you're old, you're old. And Hugo was old. Suppose that's how he got the better of me. Didn't think someone with that shriveled of a cock could outmaneuver me. Of course, you think that one minute and then the next you're being sucked into a book made of human skin and inked with a mixture of cum and blood. Disgusting fucking thing." She set her gaze on the smoldering ruin the book became when she emerged. She giggled and swept away the ashes with one hand. Evelyn moved through the room, her steps unnaturally quick. "Oh yes, this fucking library. Full of instructions on how to capture and contain my family. Also disgusting. Hugo was such a fucking prick. A smart prick, though. Shame he's dead. I would like to kill him. Maybe I did. I think I can walk through time. Can you do that, Elliot? No. Hang on. Maddie couldn't so you probably can't, right?"

"What did you do to her?"

In a flash, Evelyn was between him and Maddie's body. The creature pulled back Maddie's eyelids while grinning obscenely next to Maddie's slack face. "Emptied out the old noggin. You miss a good bit in forty seven years. Apparently I missed a whole war. A Great War, at that. Guess there's another one scheduled though. She's still in there, don't worry. I tucked her away into a little room inside her own mind. Easy to move around in someone's head when they're not screaming for you to get out. Imagine, walking into someone's house, and they start screeching at you. I don't like doing it. Nor you, I imagine. You're Elliot, still, right? Of course you are. Hang on. I'm catching up. Here, this might tickle."

With a flick of her hand, a finger turned into a sliver of shadow pushing into Elliot's eye. Instantly, he experienced the surreal sensation of having a guest inside his own mind. Instead of pain or discomfort, though, he saw something completely different. Maddie, kneeling naked before him, with his cock in her mouth. The image vanished as Evelyn withdrew. "God, what was that? What did you do to me?"

"Distracted you while I plundered all the details of your entire life. Tripped over that little fantasy on my way in. Spiced it up a little, and put it on the movie reel of the mind. Movie reels seem new. Or old. Fucking time. I mean, fucking as an expletive to accentuate my frustration with the concept of linear time. It's not actually time to fuck. Almost though, from the look of your little cock."

Elliot tried to hide the bulge in his pants while cursing himself. How could he have an erection when a demon was standing in the room with him? The image she'd made him see, though. He'd never seen anything like it. He didn't know a woman would prostrate herself like that before him or any man. He wondered if it was actually what Maddie looked like under her dress. "Please," he managed to say, "I ask for mercy."

Evelyn spun on her heel. "Mercy? Mercy for what? You haven't offended me. Shit, you freed me. You get a reward, big guy! Your very own fuck toy, like you always wanted. Maddie, yoo-hoo, stand up and strip. Show the man what he's won."

Maddie did stand up. Her hands went to work on her dress, a vacant stare looking out at Evelyn as she peeled away the outer layers of her clothes. Elliot could only watch with fascinated horror as the woman he'd borne a secret, sometimes jealous, affection for over the course of the past weeks now showed him her body. Except it wasn't her doing it. It was the creature controlling her mind. Elliot pleaded, "Make her stop. I don't want this."

"Of course you do," Evelyn said with a sneer. "All men want this. All women want this. All things that fuck want this. They want a nice and willing receptacle to dump their spunk into or get their spunk from. All the entanglements of a relationship aren't relevant. I've been in her mind. Know what I found there? An unhealthy fixation with Captain Jasperwell. Did you know she goes to his bedroom at night almost four times a week to play with her pussy on his bed. She likes to rub her juices into his sheets so on the day he does come home he'll have some fucked up smell in his head that drives him to her again. Yes, again. He fucked her once, and she lies to herself about his cock not going soft halfway through or his interest in her tits being more than nil. The poor girl is deluded. She locked herself up in her own mind. I just did the rest of the work. With one little twist of my finger, I will shatter all of it. Her mind is cast into oblivion, you get a new, happy fucktoy, and I get...well, I get to be not bored for the first time in a few decades. So, tell me you don't want that. Maybe she'd prefer you to be the toy. I could ask..."

"No...wait," Elliot hated himself for the thoughts in his head. If what Evelyn said were true, she could destroy his mind as easily as a whisper. His thoughts tried to turn quickly enough to stay ahead of the manic creature. He called on everything he'd read in the library, hoping to see some path to getting Evelyn to at least leave if not back in her prison. "It's not that I'm ungrateful. If you saw my mind then, yes, you know my fantasy, but I want it with her mind in tact."

Evelyn frowned. "Tell you what. You decide what stays and what goes." She snapped her fingers.

Maddie blinked. She looked down at her naked body and tried to cover herself. "Elliot, this thing locked me in my mind. Why are you standing there gawking at me? I had to watch her make me undress for you. Undo whatever you did."

"You did it," Elliot said. "You read those words, not me. Stop talking for a moment and think." As he said it, the words died in Maddie's lips. Her eyes widened as she tried to speak and failed. Elliot experienced a rush of power as he realized he'd stopped her from talking with mere words. "Stop covering yourself." She did as he commanded. Her eyes turning from alarm to contempt. "Don't look at me like that. Maddie, you could have a happy life with me. You're so beautiful. We can go to America and get away from all these troubles. I could make you. I could erase all the you that ever was." As the power rushed through him, he briefly wondered if Evelyn had changed his mind as well. "Forget Captain Jasperwell. You don't love him. You love me."

Maddie's eyes softened, and she smiled. She tried to speak and again no words came out.

"You can talk."

"Oh Elliot. I do love you. I've known it from the moment I saw you." She moved to him and wrapped her arms around his neck, pressing her naked flesh against him. His cock nudged against her hip through his clothes.

Evelyn hissed from the shadows. "Is this what society has become since I've been locked up? Maudlin confessions of love?"

Elliot felt the cold, unfamiliar intrusion in his mind. He heard Evelyn's voice echoing in his own head. I thought we could have more fun prodding you gently toward fucking her like an animal. But we can't leave you here, can we? We won't be making the same mistake as we did with Hugo, letting him lock me up. No, Elliot, your dreams of being a published scholar will have to overcome your urge to fuck anything that moves. Most of all your little toy. Now, let's see what you really want out of Maddie. As the cold sensation left, with it went a sense Elliot never knew he had. Until that moment, he'd been a member of society, obeying its rules and obligations. He'd been the very thing he'd set out to study all along. Evelyn took away all the walls built in his mind keeping him from the primal lust waiting to be released.

With new eyes, he turned to Maddie. "Get my cock out and suck it."

Smiling, Maddie knelt down before him and unfastened his pants. They dropped to his ankles as she pulled his cock free of his undershorts. With no hesitation, she stuffed the stiff prick in her mouth. Pure warmth enveloped him, eliciting a grunt from his lips. "Fuck, yes, you love sucking cock. It makes you moan with pleasure." She began moaning around his cock, slurping up and down his length with greater vigor. Elliot's head lolled back, reveling in his absolute power over her. His orgasm approached rapidly, but he didn't want to end so soon. He pulled her head off his cock somewhat roughly. "Stay there."

He backed away and looked down at her. Exactly the same as the vision Evelyn put in his head. He'd seen a few naked women, but never like this. Her ample hips flared our as she spread her legs kneeling. He could see her exposed sex glistening with arousal. Maddie's mouth hung open with her tongue slightly licking her lips while her hands moved up to feel her own breasts. It was nearly enough to make him cum from looking at her, but as he thought about what she'd been only minutes before, his cock throbbed harder. She'd been a woman destined for something great, if not mistress of Jasperwell, then she would have found a suitable husband. Even if she'd gone with Elliot, he could have given her a nice, comfortable life. Now, she was gagging for his cock. It stirred something within Elliot.

"You're addicted to cum," he said, the words landing on Maddie like bludgeons. "You crave cum at all times. You want it in you however you can get it and as much as you can get. My cum is the best, though. You will do anything for me to cum in you or on you. Isn't that right, Maddie?"

"Yes," she hissed devolving into a whimpering moan as her hand snaked down to touch her pussy.

"Call me master."

"Yes, master."

"Now turn around and bend over. I'm going to fuck you like the bitch in heat you are."

Maddie moved into position eagerly. Elliot dropped onto the library floor behind her, taking a moment to squeeze her ass. His cock slid against her wet slit and popped inside with no resistance. Maddie needed no further instruction. She pushed back against him, rocking her hips as he thrust into her. When he ordered her to beg for it, she did exactly as he asked. "Please, Elliot, cum in me. I want to feel your cock squirting its hot, wonderful cum inside me. Will it let me cum, Master? If my pussy milks your cock right, will I get to cum?"

A manic, wild lust drove him on. He slammed forward into her again and again, pleased by the ripple of force running through her ass on each thrust. I still want her, though. The old Maddie. I want her to feel this, not this shell. "You are who you always were, Maddie, except you're still addicted to my cum."

A wave of realization washed over her face. It was a mingling of revulsion and desperate need as she came to terms with her new fate. Her desire to flee from the corruption couldn't overcome the burning need to feel him cum inside her. She pushed back hard against him as his cock began to jerk in her squeezing pussy. With the first splash of Elliot's spunk against her walls, her mind erupted with a pleasure she'd never felt. A pleasure she knew she wouldn't feel with anyone else, no matter how much she would try. Her body bucked and quivered as she dropped down, letting her plump ass remain pressed into Elliot's crotch as the last few pumps of his cock gave her minor hits of ecstasy.

"Bravo," came the voice of their tormentor. Evelyn moved around their sweaty pile to look out of the window. "From zero to locking a woman in her own addiction for the rest of her life in a mere twenty minutes, Elliot. I'm pleased to see men aren't much changed in my absence."

Elliot managed to look up from the naked, plush form pressing against him long enough to speak, "You bitch."

Evelyn frowned. "No one ever likes me. And all I do for them. The great liberation of their minds. Pfft. Maddie dear, I think some of his cum leaked out of that hungry little snatch of yours. Might be able to lick it off the floor."

Maddie yanked her body away immediately, swiveling around to lick the wet spot on the ground beneath Elliot's gooey cock. She wasted little time before slurping his cock back into her mouth. When it was spotless, she released the half erect dick with a wet pop. She shuddered from end to end as she looked up at Elliot. "What have you done to me?"

The Deviancy clapped her hands. "Come on, you two. You have the rest of your lives to fuck one another. I need to be on my way, but first we should finish what I started. Elliot, fetch some oil and matches."


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Quixerotic1Quixerotic1over 3 years agoAuthor

Evelyn has plenty of mischief ahead of her. Next installment should clear the queue sometime early next week.

SimonNomisSimonNomisover 3 years ago

I was hooked halfway through the first page. I do hope you make this a complete story.

TSreaderTSreaderover 3 years ago
A really good start!

Really good indeed! I'm looking forward to reading more of this story and see where you take it! Thank you.

CoolSideofthePillowCoolSideofthePillowover 3 years ago

Absolutely loved the new story. Please do more.

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