All Comments on 'Mind_Hack.exe Ch. 01'

Almost finished but will have to go back and edit it. Hope to submit it by the weekend.

How's chapter 2 coming along?

Great story idea! Well written. I would say this, what he's doing is so dangerous and illegal, then why risk his freedom or life for a little perving on the neighbor? Anyone smart enough to hack what previously has been unhackable, would have a plan worthy of the hack. I gave you five stars and I added story to favorite's hope to see more to this story.

Regarding the voice, I briefly alluded to this but that will be explained more in chapter 2. There's much more that was added that the public was aware of.

Pretty good setup but the voice thing doesn't make sense at all. Your voice is physically, it's not affected by the brain

I like it. Inventive, and fun.

Really liked the first part and looking forward to more! Hope that Adam gets a chance to fuck Candace either as himself or as Mark. What about having Candace have sex with a neighbor or someone she wouldn't normally have sex with?

Also I really liked how Mark had a chance to play with her tits when normally she doesn't let him do that! Would have liked to see a reaction from her when she "woke up" about how sore her tits were or something to that effect.

Keep writing!

I have at least 5 chapters planned out and then hopefully a good segue into something else. Trying to go slower with this series though to broaden the scope while maintaining a satisfying story.

Epic story, you planning a part 2