All Comments on 'Mindless'

What a fantastic story. Well written, supperve plot. You my friend have an unique quality. More please, more. Thank you!

Thank you so much, Anonymous! I'm very happy you enjoyed it. I can tell you, those years ago, I *really* enjoyed that encounter. ;)

A good story transports you into its world. That is what your story did. I felt like I was in that club watching as the story unfolded. You are a very visual writer. Good work.

Only one word: WOW!!!

I loved it, and evidently, this was your personal experience. First times can be great.

I've actually had this drafted for years. A recent revisit of past work sucked me into polishing it up. I am very glad you liked it! Yes, it was my first time.

As for being referred to as a visual writer, that's high praise because I consider that my weakness. I tend to become wrapped up in emotions.

'enjoyed that encounter' - WOW you truly ENJOYED THE ENCOUNTER.....The description of this entire act, the lead up and the actual his fucking you was awesome ! Oh how I remember when my cherry was taken, not as emotional as yours but truly HOT ! Thx man..........

Read this true event in your life with excitement as it brought back memories of when my cherry was taken. Wonderful and exciting writing ! Write more man........

Words escape me. I hope to see more writing from you in the future.

This story is so hot and well written, that I was so turned on reading it I finally was able to swallow my new big black dildo.

Thank you!

Now where is a man that wants to take my cherry?