All Comments on 'Mindy’s Imaginary Friend-Non-Erotic'

And they are fascinating (classical definition) versions of a Modern Fairy Tale. Morally Neutral, Ethically balanced stories about the overlap of the Mundane World and the Supernatural.

T_T, I suspect, if there is a criticism of either.both stories, that the critics will complain of a lack of violent punishment of the Females for becoming mature women.

I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.

So very good. Thanks

Though based on the Cindy version, was surprised Temen didn't encourage Cindy to marry and thus propagate through a dual physical-ecto pregnancy like his father had.

Enjoyed both tales, and in awe that when you had the original vision, you were able to recognize there two stories. Literally literary twins. Fascinating. Great job. 5* for both.