All Comments on 'Mindy's New Job'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Small glitch

You reposted the story, as in there are two stories in this one both the same.

Its not a bad story and actually kind of sweet. Slow build-up, I am curious to see what happens next.

darkravenkindarkravenkinover 13 years ago
Pretty good opening.

I really enjoyed reading that. Not everything has to be down and dirty the first time or anytime really. It was a good read. Five stars :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
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"Really," Pip asked in an almost disbelieving voice?

Why are you putting question marks after the sentence? It belongs after the dialog.

ChrisTor22ChrisTor22over 13 years ago
2 copies in one??

Great beginnings..... Thanks!!

SO many possibilities..... LOL

Keep writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Absolutely Delightful

A family that lives together with honesty, integrity and real openess is difficult to find - you have exposed it to us. Now, let us see how you continue with it.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
A nice story

Sweet and cute story that's nicely done,Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Excellent story

Nice story, well told. Is it a prequel?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Hilarious!

Great story ~ Hilarious!

pandoras_evil_pandoras_evil_about 13 years ago

Charming, delightful and dare I say cute.

Looking forward to the next installment.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 13 years ago
Read this after part two

Very very good.

Kind of understanding aren't they, more parents should be like that, not joking. Imagine if parents had this much understanding in real life, there would be so much more productivity in society than there is today.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

"Dad?"

"Yes Pip?"

"How come you're not getting hard?

Well besides being nervous because I've been mentally conditioned all my life to believe this is illegal, immoral and unethical, I'm nervous additionally because I, like all guys with good looking daughters, deep, deep down secretly harbor the burning desire to do wonderfully naughty things to every hole in your body with my fingers, tongue and throbbing hard cock! In addition to hiding that deep down, you add the fact that my wife is standing right there, and I certainly wouldn't want her to find out that I occasionally pretend I'm fucking you senseless while I'm fucking her senseless.

Oh yeah, almost forgot! Mastrubating with a washcloth sucks, it's like wet sandpaper or getting a wet carpet burn. Not a turn-on sweetie!

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