All Comments on 'Miniature Ch. 03'

I'm dying to know how they resolve the size issue. *ahem* ;)

I can't wait to see how they resolve their problem. looking forward to the next chapter.

It felt like there were at least a few chapters missing between 3 and 4. Why doesn't Lena want to go to her any more, why are they suddenly in love with each other? Like your other stories, your characters tend to jump right into the I Love You stage before any real plot development. The story has potential, but it needs work.

I love the whole concept and the story is just so adorable. But how are you going to end it?

Come on, no month or two, knock out the next chapter! I can come up with it, but want to see yours!!!!

Great imagination and ideas! I'm enjoying the little details (no pun intended) in this story like how Lena walks from one side of a book to the other to turn the page. I'm curious to see how she and James are going to work things out. Looking forward to the next chapter!

When's the next chapter coming up? I'm really antsy!

Great story really looking forward to chapter 4 and too know how they will make it work out (i hope it has a happy ending)?

You just left us with a cliffhanger!!!! Hurry up!!!!

i'll admit that my intentions when visiting this site aren't always "pure" but this story was better than i ever would have imagined, completely amazing. Please continue to write.

It is a crime if no further chapters get added.

Please complete, at least write what happened to the sister! A date she should never have went on!? Loved the story crazy cliff hangar.

What's the matter with you?? I guess I'll have to stop reading the beginnings of your stories... You NEVER seem to finish any of them.

JERK!!!!!!

Does anyone know if someone has ever written an ending for this? I have plenty of ideas for more chapters:

- What happens the first time Lena gets to see James naked? Does he set her down between his legs - and what does she do next?

- Now that they are boyfriend-girlfriend, is he less restrained? When they start sleeping together does he take a feel in the middle of the night? When does he give her a bubble bath the first time?

- What happens when he meets her mother? Do we find out she's ultra-submissive and doesn't think it's cheating if they're not the same size?

Many questions, inquiring minds want to know!