by secretme
I thought he was better than that. At least he feels guilt.
This is a masterful chapter. Most writers in this genre make the more audience-pleasing choice to emphasize romance and erotic power over the basic bloody horror of what being a vampire entails. I just love that Rillan is a monster who loves, not a lover who is monstrous. The whole story only keeps getting more interesting, difficult, and dark. Thank you for that.
Feeding on Ariel was completely understandable. Killing her... well. I guess I forgot about the monster inside the man.
You are incredibly talented, I love your work but would love some more chapters ... PLEASE!!!!
Mira. Finally got around to reading this series tonight. Been meaning to for a while. <br><br><b><center><i>Enthralling </b></i> is the word.</center> <br><br>One of the best vampire stories I've ever read (and being somewhat of an addict of mythology I've read a lot of them). I enjoyed LOTP but I love this one more. It's so beautiful and even through the happy times I can feel his pain and a horrible sense of dread for the situation they're in. Anyway, I hope you come back with the next chapter <i>very</i> soon. Like tomorrow? ; )
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very few are able to weave the erotic into horror in a way that leaves me breathless with excitement.
love the way you master the words and weave the spell.
I hadnt read this yet because I loved leader of the pack. I am sooo glad I decided to read this. Its amazing!
How will he behave when he next sees Mira? (Moira;I believe that this is the irish spelling)
I agree lots of WOW... great chapter can't wait to read more..love it love it love it...
WOW!!! all i can say right now is...wow...yeah that's pretty much it just a big ol WOW!!! love it can't wait to see wat happens next... oooooo and i heard about LOP can't wait for that either i'm so excited
I love erotic horror. Rillan is a tormented soul and I actually feel sorry for him. When he is "human" he is so sad...when he is the monster..God! You make him horrifying. You are a fine writer to make me sympathize with his plight. I love how you gave us a glimpse of his past and what he lost...waiting patiently for the next chapter...
Definitely bloody and detailed but it made for a good read. Short and sweet. I can't wait for the next one, as always.
Now, what will Mira think when he tells her all about this? I hope she'll be strong enough to sympathize. Can't wait for more chapters of this... and of course the continuation of Leader of the Pack!!!!