Mira Ch. 12

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Re. Sweet Scene

And when she woke up? Oh my god!! My heart broke.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Sweet scene

You made me cry with the ending!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
GAHH

They were so close to being reuinited!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wouldn't it be neat if...

Cullen & Aislin came to the rescue?

ShondramwwShondramwwover 15 years ago
you are amazing

I love this story and I hope mira and rollen end up together I will keep reading Love it

naughty11206naughty11206over 15 years ago
No words

To describe how wonderful I think this story is. I thought nothing could top leader of the Pack. But this is giving it a run for it's money.

I can't wait to read the next chapter.

And you're characters are so very good. I liked Stephenie Meyers series but I still, after having read them twice, cannot wrap my head around her main character. I had to read her 12 chapter draft on her website of Midnight Sun to actually understand her. I have to agree with tnme3, her characters have no depth. Mira and Rillan are wonderful.

Keep up the great work.

tnme3tnme3over 15 years ago
Twilight?

Your story reminded me of Twilight by Stephenie Meyer, or at least, the recent chapters. Vampire leaves human because vampire thinks it's for the best; but you're story was much better and not stupid at all. But, you're characters have depth where Stephenie Meyer's characters did not have any at all. Also, you're story is also interesting with events going on.<br/>

I'm looking forward to the next chapters.<br/><br/>

P.S. I'm sorry for comparing you to Stephenie Meyer. That was harsh, even on my scale.

Smeeker082Smeeker082over 15 years ago
longing for more

longing for more, hope you dont keep me hanging long

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
grrr I love it...

almost done yes but your drawing it out soo sloooooooooooowwwly.. oh but I love mira so much I just want to see her happy with her love please please please post the rest sooon.. PLEASE.. i love your stories and this one is just one more to love...obviously hoping for more soon.. thank you for writing them all...

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Pfft

Forget the other sacrafice!

I want my vamp boy and my girlie together! And i'm sure both of them want the same thing. PLEASE make them together. I can't stand the sight or thought of my girlie with that 'Liam' character. He seems like a pu$$y of a man anyways. :) hahaha

LOVE the chapter though and I do love all of your work so I'll be buying both of your stories when they come onto print. Especially since i'm your favorite Muse! :) hahaha

Oh yea, i hired myself as your muse. I bug you about every chapter that you have posted from both stories lol. You should be used to it by now. :)

-Bella

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