All Comments on 'Miracle Cream Ch. 04'

I hope there is more to this series.

Enjoyable, just a bit odd to me how it was glossed over his mom having his child. Between his own still angry feelings towards his family and Jairo and Dayanna's feelings it was odd there wasn't more debate or drama surrounding the decision.

Can I get Dayana to invest my money? Whatever she is doing is going quite well. I would like to see this story continue also. Grouch6977

It needs another chapter at least so you can end the series and answer all the unanswered questions

Please do add to this more chapters

Mas por favor

A lot of the sex scenes were just mentioned instead of getting detailed out. Didn't really make sense that he forgave her for cheating so quicky. Should have made her earn it better. The reason that he cheated as well shouldn't have mattered considering chapter 1. Although chapter 1 has been getting ignored for majority of the chapters. I agree the mothers pregnancy was glossed over as well

Page 11 and 12 just killed it for me, you add these dramatic scenes and yet nothing happens later just a little hissy fit and everything is right and dandy, it needs more balls, most of your stories do, most of em have dramatic and horrible things happen to the MC and throughout the story he has a small hissy and gets over it, hate doesn’t go away that easy or have that light an affect it is a powerful and addictive emotion

More chapters for sure too much going on the stop now a full 5 plus stars

Please soul71 you can't end it here, there is so much more to cover.

Does that bitch Delilah get what she fucking deserves, namely the loss of her license to practice therapy.

How does Cory handle his "sluts' do they all have a baby with him.

Just no I thoroughly enjoyed this story and time permitting your fans would like to see you continue writing about Dayana and Cory.

Love this series, I would love for you to revisit this series down the line and some aunts and grandmothers and some sluts having babies.

I very much enjoyed reading the twists and turns of Cory Dilan Millar's story. I'm not thrilled with some of the choices and behaviors but went along for the ride. It probably makes me horrible but I kinda wish Zach died in a plane crash on his way to repair a server meltdown in Colorado. I just liked Alice and wanted the twins to be part of the Millars. It would be fun to read an epilogue ten years on with Pixie, Zoe, and Dayana being mothers. Since Dayana seems to make money faster than Warren Buffet, maybe the church can unload the Gazebo property to become a family compound. Any way, fun story and I am looking forward to reading some of your other stories. Thank you Soul71!

Honestly this was a good story to me right until the whole Zach essentially getting cucked abd now just because this story takes to heart "size matters" Alice is just going to eventually either force Zach to let her be with Cory or trick him again, if the story wasn't ending right here at least.

so much scope to continue, please more chapters

I was really enjoying this story until Cory an Dayana cheat on each other . I can't read past that anymore .

5 ⭐️ story that really needs to continue please. There is so much left wide open that I would dearly love to see continued.

GREAT JOB.

Loved every part of this series but why did you just quit??? You need to continue and see where this goes!! Mother pregnant sister's wanting to be pregnant Alice pregnant with twins Cory becoming a father!!! Please more!! 5 stars

Again, why is angry about his sister cheating on him and then he's ok with it. If this supposed to be fantasy, at least put a bit of realism into the cheating part. No one in there right mind would be ok to be cheated on with, Dayana did cheat on Cory willingly and out of revenge and Cory is ok with it, yeah, he let some random girl suck him off, still he didn't do it willfully. I can't connect with Cory, he should know that he's being very much manipulated by everyone.

Hi, rly love this serie, Cory sufer alot but try to get up and forward his life, dont like the betrayal, if are from his mother, Zoe or Cassi, all good, but form Dianna, mas this let a biter on lips, and the way they get him to fuck and preg could be avoid, but this is your history so you are on command, I repeat, rly love this serie, some point I dont agree but dont lesser you work, i want to ask a chp 5 if possible, with core and his sisters life over the uni and after.

I really loved this story. But I do want to mention a couple of things. One is how atleast 2-3x you started the build up to a hot scene but then weirdly cut it of. Cory's unexplained moodswings at times. Plus during the last chapters it was too much about cars and barely any sex. And it could use a spellcheck. Still, great story and I wish there was more 😊👍.

This is my third time reading this series and still love it. I do wish there was a follow up. What with mom knocked up sisters wanting to be. The birth of the twins, Cory's future after do the girls move on or stay the course? So many questions going unanswered. Well written and still a joy to read.

Glad

To see I wasn’t the only one that’s reread this 3 times! I too have several unanswered questions. Did the parents get the 32? What happens when Cory graduates? How is it when there’s a newborn in the house? How do the basement shenanigans play out? There’s a lot of art laying on the table.

Yet again, another story that isn't finished...😔 still 5 stars...

Great story to read throughout. But. What a crap ending. Surely there is a follow-up as others have asked for. All those loose ends need to be sorted out.

Love the story series definately a 5. Really should continue this story here or on patreon.

good story but do Dayana and Cory ever have kids and what about the rest of the women in his life.

I keep coming back to this story hoping for more. What about his mother's new car, the children he is going to have with his family. So much more to come, please!!!