by TheTalkMan
Loved you're most corrupt one yet, I hope after this series of stories you continue with more new material
Thanks again
I think Frank should overcome her corruption with his own. With her being a criminal and him a cop it would be a good end...
Somehow I'd convinced myself that this was the final chapter and I became increasingly concerned that we weren't going to see a resolution to the story of Gwen and her father. But then I looked back and realised there was one more chapter to go. Phew...
With regards to this one, the sex was hot (as always), but I'm less enamoured about the supernatural elements than you are. I'm also not so keen on the utter humiliation you like to enforce on some characters. The wife having her husband's infidelity almost literally rubbed into her face wasn't that much of a turn-on, although the blonde elf was sexy as fuck. I fear the much previewed War of the Monarchs is not going to be all that much of a big deal for me, if it ever actually arrives.
Oh well, roll on the final chapter and hopefully some good old fashioned daddy-daughter incest...
always loved your stories but i wish you had more men in the seduction role like bruce rather than them always falling prey to wily women. Tim was especially pathetic, a new low for your male characters. Still really enjoyed Frank's story, hope he doesn't get screwed (figuratively) by Esmeralda.
Really liked the Frank part. Wish there was an entire story of his escapades post-Christmas.
Esmerelda is an interesting character. Don't get me wrong. Hot evil women that wreck havoc on men's lives are very much your thing, but we usually follow the story of the one guy they "keep." With her, it's the guys she leaves we see.
Haven’t liked any of the epilogues however 0- 10 was great
Fuck, she's hot. Like the elements of findom you've woven into her story and others throughout this series. I like some outright exploitation in these kinds of stories, where the guy ends up ruined.
Please do a follow up where Esmeralda winds up losing this time. Mainly because Patrice does not like the idea of her favorite ride being stolen by someone else. Besides, given her scheming the two would make a deadly dynamic duo.