All Comments on 'Mirage'

A bit weird this one, but no less enjoyable.

I felt the switching between "dream" and "reality" (or was it all a dream?) a bit disjointed at first, but it seemed to resolve itself by the end.

Nice hanging ending by the way :)

Looking forward to reading more from you.

Munchy

Disjointed is right. There may be the core of a story in this mess, but I couldn't find it.<p>In addition, the writing was execrable. Extraneous commas, missing periods, and moaning <i>into</i> someone's cock? Please.<p>Get an editor, by all means.

I absolutely loved it! This is just my type of story 😊