by StoryTeller07
Also like the way you intertwined this story with Brandi and Kelly, and to see Janet get what she deserved. Thank you for writing this chapter!
Tying it to Brandi's saga was a nice touch. And I like seeing more of the thoughts of the slaves. Looking forward to the next installments in both stories.
they all gew a little ad there is a chance for something really great. The Brandi/Kelly tie in was well done too
Hope your going to do more on this story .... I loved it. Thank you for writing it.
... came back to it after years. Probably 3rd or 4th time reading and it grew on me. Great plot, character and relationship development. And surprisingly great fun to read, considering it was a repeat reading. Thank You and all the best