All Comments on 'Miranda and Geraldine Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great to see this story continue

Also like the way you intertwined this story with Brandi and Kelly, and to see Janet get what she deserved. Thank you for writing this chapter!

FerrumitzalFerrumitzalover 11 years ago

Tying it to Brandi's saga was a nice touch. And I like seeing more of the thoughts of the slaves. Looking forward to the next installments in both stories.

DesireeFoxDesireeFoxalmost 11 years ago
Very well done

they all gew a little ad there is a chance for something really great. The Brandi/Kelly tie in was well done too

CherokeeLilithCherokeeLilithover 8 years ago

Hope your going to do more on this story .... I loved it. Thank you for writing it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Wonderful story

... came back to it after years. Probably 3rd or 4th time reading and it grew on me. Great plot, character and relationship development. And surprisingly great fun to read, considering it was a repeat reading. Thank You and all the best

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When you send an email enter an email address for a reply. I will often write a story by request. You will find more of my stories on Smashwords, by Gary Bingham Thank you to all on Literotica for the opportunity to publish stories and for readers comments as that has improv...

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