All Comments on 'Mirror of My Mind'

by Ann Douglas

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jenorma2012jenorma2012over 6 years ago
great story

I only hope you will have a part 2 to this story, if not please consider writing one, and let us know will she follow through with the promise of not selling the mirror, and how is Lin Yao going to help her

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Chapter 2!

This was a fantastic story; written very well. You captured my attention and I would love a continuation! Please don’t leave us hanging.

MaonaighMaonaighover 6 years ago
Worthwhile

Yet another worthwhile and enjoyable story in the Douglas canon. My sole gripe about this one is that it seemed to finish rather abruptly. Now I'm not normally one to urge sequels/further chapters from authors unless there is a clear intention. This story, however, is yelling out for more, if only to satisfy the reader's curiosity as to how Lin Yao helps Susan to fix the problems in her life. The ball's in your court, Ann.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Excellent story

Oh please, you MUST write more on this. So many places to go with it. Your talent is so pleasant, thank you for sharing your stories. I especially enjoy the way you write Lesbian Stories, so sensual, plausible and realistic. Thanks again. SS

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenover 6 years ago
Excellent story!

Oh, I really loved this one! Please write a chapter 2!!! Thank you for sharing this with us!

Ann DouglasAnn Douglasover 6 years agoAuthor
A Sequel

Aside from the fact that I hate writing sequels, I wrote Mirror Of My Mind back in 2003 and to be honest, I have no idea how I would make a sequel of it. At least not a direct one. The best I think I could come up with would be to visit Susan today and explore where her life has gone. Perhaps I'll toss that into my idea file and see what develops.

gnome_mangnome_manover 6 years ago
Very Well Done

An excellent story, with a slant on mirror-image fantasy that I haven't seen before. You could turn this into a full-length novel without any trouble, if that was your wish. Mr. Fong could be the representative of an evil magician and Susan could be caught up in a magic war. Lots of possibilities there for expansion.

Or not. It's up to you, and I'm sure that you'll choose wisely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I always liked this one. As far as throwing an idea out there, how about introducing Yao Lin to a lover?

TayJK

tayjk42@gmail.com

kathy2012kathy2012over 2 years ago

The mirror is priceless! The story is priceless! My lover and I had fun with our freestanding mirrors after reading

the story aloud to each other!

All the best,

Kathy

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