All Comments on 'Mirror Vision'

Try a narrative in the past tense so it flows better.

Why don't you just slip into a maid's uniform and a pair of heels and serve these narcissists properly?

Next time two large cocks penetrating one pussy

and then the same on the other

You delight in appropriate, well-chosen words. Now try grammar. Take a look at these items from your prose:

"The classic narcissist, little impresses or distracts Steve beyond an inflated and mostly imagined aura of himself." [Hint: what is the subject of this sentence?]

"Despite Amy's efforts and the company of my wife and I, whom he has just met...."

"or to take responsibility for enlisting Amy to drag Jennifer and I here."

"I hope the troubles between Jennifer and I will begin to fade...."

I thought the story was interesting and decently written. Even somewhat believable.

Not a bad story at all.

This is a cuckold story. It doesn't start out like that and you have to read half the story before discovering it. For me it was a big waste of time so I thought I might save some with this comment.

Why just two men, why doesn’t the whore just take the palomino?

Wife takes two cocks after vision in mirror.

In her vision she sees that the writer...um I mean, the husband is clearly a repressed homosexual and wants to live vicariously through her. And since she didnt plan to marry a gay dude she figures, hey why not have some fun with dudes who like pussy.

Cant blame her, women like to have sex with men who like pussy, not dudes like her writer...I mean husband. Call me crazy....