All Comments on 'Mirrorworld Girls'

Although a bit laborious, your style added to the story. After the first several pages I wasn't sure I was going to finish your story. But, by that time I was hooked. Very explicit and erotic... and sick!

I am anxious to read more of your work.

Thanks

Could have been cut up into smaller stories; the mood kept changing; made it difficult to keep up the feeling; good story though; the beginning scene was VERY erotic; others less so

Incredibly well written. the erotic content waxed and waned but the strength of the writing carried me along. The protagonist possibly hates himself too much but, all in all, magnificent

I have to say, it has been a very, very long time since I read anything this good. It can really only be described by one word: Brilliant. Simply, purely, absolutely brilliant. The descriptions are powerful, yet not overbearing, allowing the reader's imagination to wander just enough to make this into a fantasy for the individual. The sex is meaningful. The characters are endearing, fascinating, and real. The truly unfortunate thing is that it is held back from art by something which I find frustratingly intangible. Given experience and inspiration, this author could really be something special. Truly remarkable.

I have been a Literotica reader for years, and NEVER before have I commented. However, I just had to thank you for writing this story in a style that ventures so far away from the usual formula. The plot was solid and the voice is incredibly erotic, by far this is my most favorite story ever. Thanks again, and please write more!?!

I think these characters are quite good and interesting, they could be developed outside an erotic story I think, perhaps an off beat love story?

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