All Comments on 'Misfire Ch. 01'

Very well done until you left the story on a really, not good note.

Boring. It is not fun to read about characters, who mostly doubt their feeling and are afraid of their actions. Interesting characters take charge, risk, express feelings through actions. Boring ones, stop themselves, fear, only talk.

A wonderful first chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next

Excellent. *****

wow too much drama over an age gap if you ask me?

Great story can't wait for second chapter

Can’t wait for Chapter 2.

it was going. good. 3* cause i hate manwhores. if he loved her, he should have been calibate.

Misfire is right. She had actually successfully let him know she couldn't have an intimate relationship with him, and he was accepting it, all she had to do was continue along. But she got so hormoned up that she didn't realize that, then as soon as their orgasms were over, she reverted right back to how she felt before, now that she got her horniness out of the way. Yeah, she fucked up all right. She was not ready to have a real relationship with him. It's all really messed up now. Don't know if they can recover.