All Comments on 'Miss C Seduces Her Boss Ch. 01'

The story about Miss C really hits my target! I loved it. I have a vision of what she looked like and it makes me hard just thinking about it!

This story would have been much better had the author made Batman more real. C's seduction would have been no less erotic had he reacted to her as he divined her intentions. A high powered exec is not going to sit there dumbstruck. Some dialogue between the two would have helped considerably to flesh out the characters.

And is Batman going to simply let her dress and walk away after a hot fuck in the shower? Not one who is president, and older than C.

The strip was great and the sex hot, but it could have been so much better. Keep writing.

Great debut and now waiting for the enxt installment. Good characters and nice style. More please, this is a good story in the making and well told