All Comments on 'Miss Julia'

by Brie_de_Jour

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Accidentally clicked 4, this shouldve been 5 stars solid

I die such good story much love

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Anonymous

Agree, such a great story. Would very much like to see more historical ones from you.

Horseman68Horseman68over 6 years ago
Damn Great Story.

Just found this story and author. Will read all others. Bravo.

HyakinthosTheoiHyakinthosTheoiover 6 years ago
The more I read the more I love your work

Please continue. At one point I wanted to shout with gladness at having found an author with your wonderful writing style. I will definitely be reading the rest of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
You have to read a lot of them to find a great one

I am blown away. Your writing is of a totally professional quality. Character development spot on. Well done

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
At last

For years I've been looking for erotic short stories that are well written and with historic themes. Finally I have found you! And as someone else wrote, the chracters seem so genuine. Please write more erotic short stores, or better yet, include them in a novel!

Geon54Geon54about 5 years ago
Dialogue

Having read several of your stories, I am stuck by your mastery of several elements. Some have been noted by others (setting, character, plot). I don't recall anyone mentioning your dialogue. Its tough to strike the balance between "sounding" period yet still having it flow as if spoken only yesterday. You not only manage that quite nicely, but it is also makes the characters seem naturally witty which is perhaps a greater accomplishment. The reader tends to forget they are reading a period piece because they are so entertained by your characters. Well done!

"Never!" .....stop writing.

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