All Comments on 'Miss Mabel'

by potsherd22

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Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 11 years ago
Fine convincing writing

captured the era and the manners well. There must be more to come. Please?

potsherdpotsherdover 10 years ago
Correcting an error

I apologise for making my protagonist arrive by train to St Pancras station ten years before it opened to passengers. That passage should have read as follows:

"I took the Midland Counties Railway to Rugby, and changed onto the London to Birmingham Railway to complete my journey to their splendid Terminus at Euston."

Thanks to Brian for the loan of the 1855 Bradshaw.

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticover 7 years ago
Interesting story

Interesting story.

A bit cruel, but I understand that it is the nineteenth century, so things were different then ...

I intrigue the continuation, I want to see if it is an authentic romance or that is this story.

At the moment, 5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

Horseman68Horseman68almost 7 years ago
Good Beginning. Will Continue.

Enough said.

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