All Comments on 'Miss North Carolina Ch. 01'

Great Job. Both erotic and humorous. Look forward to subsequent chapters. Just two criticisms. The southern accent was too strong especially on a former top beauty contest queen and especially for a finance executive. The one would have had extensive speech or acting or singing training and the other a top quality education. She would retain a slight accent for it charm effect.

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