by Route66Girl
I prefer good characters and some romance -just like you have done.
Now I will have to read the rest of your stories ! ! !
I wanna read more of Miss Nova and Evan.
Detail, character development, pacing -- it's all there, with bells on. Very nice, very nice indeed.
That was the hottest story I've read on Lit in a long time!!
When are those other chapters coming?! I can't wait to read more!
Great stuff!
This is one the best stories that I have ever read on this site. Excellent job, I can't wait for Chapter 2.
5/5
This is one of my fave ever stories on Lit......I've read it a few times and love it!
Short red dresses and white cowboy hats to begin with. How could anything go wrong from there?
Great Story. Waiting for Chapter 2?? Though I guess it's been long enough that you might not even be writing here anymore, which is a shame. But, hopefully you get this comment anyway.
Please post another chapter, I want to know what happens!!!
It has the begining of a good story, Why don't you continue it?
This is a story that begs for much more! There should be at least 3 more chapters!
Great tale and great writimg!
I just happened to read your story. I'll read more. We girls have to stick together. You got me wet and horny, and that's a LOT for your first story. I liked it!
Damn girl you better call that number. I'd give you five stars but a four (4) on the Budweiser Scale is worth a whole lot more !!!
Very satisfying indeed! Thanks!
2 wee quibbles common on Literotica..
1 "Grinded " isn't a proper word.
2 "Smirk" has a negative and condescending connotation you don't intend.
YES, Miss Nova deserved a second chapter. But this was written in 2002, I don't think another chapter is coming, which is unfortunate. I wish nothing but the best to a very talented writer, Route66girl. Thanks for all your stories girl, I hope for found fame and fortune with your words!