by overblown
You had me for the 1st half, but the second half went off track. A teacher breaking down, getting excited from the bike was interesting...then it ventured into the realm of sci-fi and lost me.
It starts well, but my preference would be for something a bit more believeable.
More than very good opening! But I want to know his demands and, more, does she become compliant? (By the way, the writing is great.
This could and should have gone further. Did the slimy bastard have an American Pie episode and shoot off before things could move further? But good one and keep writing.
This could and should have gone further. Did the slimy bastard have an American Pie episode and shoot off before things could move further? But good one and keep writing.
nice start.make it romantic...it looks like the teacher wants him too.lol...keep writing.
will have an impressive cock and will lose his virginity as he plows the petite teacher into orgasm after orgasm. Will he have some of his mates over to help her learn more about teen sex with the teacher?
good premise but gotta finish the plot and some more action, you might try backing it with some strong common sense and the obvious in this type of story, well written so far.
id prefer that she is mature and resists but fairly gets seduced and gives him blow job cuz hes such a stud/player
As a woman teacher, I dream of this sort of thing happening to me all the time. Though my students are quite a bit younger - I teach English at a junior high in the USA, so you get the idea of how young my students are. I'm 38, a mother of a 12 year old sweet little boy, and still have a body to die for (I workout 6 days a week), long auburn/chestnut color hair, green eyes, and a nice firm C cup. And for this reason, I notice all of the young hot boys (my pupils) mentally raping me with their eyes in class all the time - most of them don't try to hide their erections either (they want me to notice). I feel them lusting after my MILF teacher body and it makes my cunt moist, knowing that these boys probably work themselves up into a masturbatory frenzy thinking about all the different ways they'd rape and fuck me - I want these young studs to trick me into giving them a detention only its a teacher gang rape plan and they end up makin me their MILF teacher whore - I became their after school activity - Rape the Teacher club :)
Any - please get to Part of this hot story so I can continue fucking my cunt to it with my huge pink toy :)
This is a fab start. Really looking forward to see how this develops
This story has the potential to be great! ...great setup...great execution so far... now the question is, how far is he willing to take his plan? Can he take it as far as he wants...or better, as far as I want? Please write more, and soon!
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