All Comments on 'Miss Taken'

by Recidiva

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rgraham666rgraham666almost 18 years ago
Loved it

Alternately disconcerting, funny, sweet, romantic and erotic by turns.

A lovely piece of work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Your story was

mentioned in today's New Story Review in the Author's Hangout.

Aurora BlackAurora Blackalmost 18 years ago
YAY!

Wonderful work, Diva! What a charming, sexy bastard (meant in a good way) Aaron was! The dialogue was cute and funny as hell. Congratulations, sweetie!

txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayalmost 18 years ago
*smile*

cute...just too damn cute..enjoyed it. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

SamanthaKayneSamanthaKaynealmost 18 years ago
adorable!!!

What an absolutely and utterly adorable piece of work! Charming, sweet, sexy, fun - I do believe this officially counts as a "romp."

Seriously, you have wonderful dialogue, a great sense of light-hearted adventure, and sexy enough to do exactly what it needed. WONDERFUL piece.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Made me feel all warm and goey

Sweet, romantic, just enough suspension of disbeleif :) It made me feel ... good n hot!

MarshAlienMarshAlienover 16 years ago
What wonderful dialogue!

I'm so glad I stopped by. it was an exceptional little tale, full of life and love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Just an encounter

Not much of a story, just an encounter, so I gave it 50% for great dialogue.

loverandtheliarloverandtheliarover 14 years ago
Funny & Charming

Hilarious! I love the "twist" at the end...great!!

rbloch66rbloch666 months ago

She says ‘no’ several times, makes it quite clear, in fact, and he persists in his pursuit, to the point of physically coercing her. Even though she responded in such a manner, she appears to welcome the inevitable result. Some women will crave this behaviour as they like a man who takes charge. Others will consider it rape.

Forgive me if I’m confused. But this makes no sense to me at all. How is a guy supposed to know what a woman wants if she can’t be honest about it? Could end up in serious trouble because of it.

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