by Recidiva
Alternately disconcerting, funny, sweet, romantic and erotic by turns.
A lovely piece of work.
mentioned in today's New Story Review in the Author's Hangout.
Wonderful work, Diva! What a charming, sexy bastard (meant in a good way) Aaron was! The dialogue was cute and funny as hell. Congratulations, sweetie!
cute...just too damn cute..enjoyed it. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
What an absolutely and utterly adorable piece of work! Charming, sweet, sexy, fun - I do believe this officially counts as a "romp."
Seriously, you have wonderful dialogue, a great sense of light-hearted adventure, and sexy enough to do exactly what it needed. WONDERFUL piece.
Sweet, romantic, just enough suspension of disbeleif :) It made me feel ... good n hot!
I'm so glad I stopped by. it was an exceptional little tale, full of life and love.
Not much of a story, just an encounter, so I gave it 50% for great dialogue.
She says ‘no’ several times, makes it quite clear, in fact, and he persists in his pursuit, to the point of physically coercing her. Even though she responded in such a manner, she appears to welcome the inevitable result. Some women will crave this behaviour as they like a man who takes charge. Others will consider it rape.
Forgive me if I’m confused. But this makes no sense to me at all. How is a guy supposed to know what a woman wants if she can’t be honest about it? Could end up in serious trouble because of it.