All Comments on 'Missed Appointment'

Your wedding photograph could not possibly have been taken in the Spring of 1832 - the commercial daguerrotype didn't come along until 1841. Better change the date to the Spring of 1847. Doesn't affect the story, but by then all cities would have had a photographer at work..

Nice story by the way.

Not sure I would have liked this weird story but I'll never know. A good (or even moderately good) proofreader with a grammar school training in the English language would give readers a better idea of the story's concept.

de Jay

This was a most interesting story but was seriously flawed by very BAD grammar and punctuation.

If you want to continue writing and wish for readers to enjoy your good stories, please obtain at least a moderate education in basic language skills. Failing that, try to find a good, well trained editor to proofread your otherwise excellent tales.

As a minor help, I will copy a portion of what I laughingly call "Some of My Pet Peeves" to your email addy.

Keep writing.

de Jay