All Comments on 'Missing - A Chroniclers Tale Pt. 02'

by southern_ungentleman

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Wildbill314Wildbill314almost 3 years ago

Hopefully there is another chapter

muskyboymuskyboyalmost 3 years ago

Good first half but really rushed the ending. Didn't really seem resolved. Why did he even end up back with her?

gatormangatormanalmost 3 years ago

Really really liked that "Davis" ended up where he belonged. May all like him get the same treatment.

tinfoilhattinfoilhatalmost 3 years ago

This is a real good story. I can see another chapter.

Crusader235Crusader235almost 3 years ago
How

How did Davis's balls explode? I got people that needs that treatment. Excellent tale, hoping you continue it. Five stars.

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