All Comments on 'Missing Baggage'

Ended a bit abruptly. Would have liked a bit more back story. He’s in banking, what does she do? Where do they live etc? Maybe a follow-up?

Thank You

could add what happens when they return home.

I would like to see a follow up on this a little background, some suburban bliss maybe

Maybe a part 2 that tells how they deal with real life and following up after holiday? Great read thank you

Excellent start but it got too involved in the sex scenes for me over the last few pages and lost some of the romance and most of all the closure I hoped for. Sorry, can’t rate above a 4.

Great story. I like how your characters come to life.

Lost my suitcase once but didn’t have that much fun getting it back. Good story a little long in places but good non the less. Would be fun knowing how they did going and getting home telling friends and family.

WOW ! Excellent story. One of the best most erotic Romances I have read. I could not put it down until done. Emma and Sam are made for each other.