All Comments on 'Missy the Mouse'

Wow. Way too fast, the character buildup was good and I was enjoying the story until the first date. You went from becoming acquainted to fucking in one fell swoop. It went from a 4 to a 2 in one paragraph. Better luck next time, if there is a next time.

She is using him..for the fact that she is willing to mix business with pleasurer shows the type of barracuda that lurks beneath the surface. Dump her and dump the new owners.

5 stars,

This one might get a low score, not because it is a bad story but because you are 100% in the wrong category. This should have been posted in exotic couple or something like that. Even if there is a part two that somehow shows she is not just trying to use him.

Well written but too coincidental. Not erotic

Feel short changed ... such a shame ... start of a good story but much too short :(