All Comments on 'Mistakes Happen'

As I was reading this very well written story, I was picturing myself in a small coastal town in Australia. In fact, I think I've even stayed in that boarding house at some point in my travels.

Give us more.

i really enjoyed this story I would love for you to continue this story were he does get both of them together.

"Um, hullo, Janet," I said. "Fancy finding you here."

I was surprised to find Janet there too as Ida's sister was called Karen at the beginning of the story!!!!

Otherwise great!

Karen, Ida, Janet? So did Ashson nail the third sister, or was the married sister's name changed in the middle of the story?

Oh, well, I guess "Mistakes Happen."

so was this the same Janet from the Go Commando story being Ida and Karen's sister ?? very interesting .....and small town meaning only so many women to nail ....lol

So when did Bill, Karen and Ida become Bill , Janet and Ida?

These stupid mistakes put you off reading the rest of the story in case names change yet again

Karen changed miraculously into Janet - confused! You will be! 🙄