by CD_Karen
A hot story. I liked the premise and the characters. The only thing I didn't like was the the story was a narrative. I like dialogue and banter. I like interaction between the characters. I like to feel the emotions of the people in the story. This is only my opinion (my 2 cents). Thanks for your time and imagination.
Excellent story, loved the narrative and the structure. Most enjoyable.
I hope you are going to do more parts to it.