All Comments on 'Mister Jack Miller Ch. 01'

for chapter 2. I think you've been a spectator much too long.

Damn that was good!! Hope the next chapter is coming soon!!!

Very interesting and well written. Hurry with the next chapter.

Excellent story, well done! For a first attempt it was very enjoyable reading.

You, Sir, are a great story teller. No need for you to sit out as a spectator. Looking forward to the next chapter

Nothing special, as far as erotic stories go, I thought it was pretty typical. Less rushed then most, maybe.

This was the best story of non-pentrating sex on an airplane that I have ever read. I would love to have been there as I have witnessed airplane sex before but have never partaken. Only in my dreams as I rarly fly anymore

It was wonderful hearing this read by the author first hand, can't wait for the other chapters to be published.

I notice one comment from a woman who says you read it to her..Who is she? and whats her number

That was most probably the best story i have read on this site ever! Well done you.

I had that same experience...

Haven't been able to trust women since though...