All Comments on 'Mister Jack Miller Ch. 02'

You have a future in the dirty (but well written) story trade!

Getting away for a sult ,may be he is going to hook up with a keeper this time.

Keep it up!

Few can write a work so deep and artistic with a storyline that is both erotic and shows a wonderful style of composition. It makes the reader, at least this one, waiting and lusting for the next installment. What a wonderful thing that is! ;)

hope to read more of this soon and the whole sister thing is cool too,wonder where that will lead:-}. the whole plot has me hooked and i cant wait for the next part's keep em comeing . "jakk"

From exacting revenge on his cheating wife, to meeting so many of his quite unique family, this is one well written and plotted story. What I'm waiting for though, is his one on one interview with Nana...her insights and intentions should be worth waiting for!

I am absolutely dying for the next chapter...HURRY!!!!

This really should be published as a book..MORE!

Never mind the book - we have the series here in Lit. Let's see it as a film!!!

Lukas

A master piece! So smooth writing. So natural the tone! I love this kind writing.