All Comments on 'Mister Jack Miller Ch. 04'

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ShalnimarShalnimarover 19 years ago
great story

from a lurker....thank you for taking the time to share

such a fun exciting and story

LadybullLadybullover 19 years ago
Great Story!

Read this at work and had to go get off after every chapter. It was good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
WOWEE!!!

This story gets better and better with each succeeding chapter.The next chapter is the first thing I look for when I log on.

sherlock40sherlock40over 19 years ago
It just keeps getting better!

This is a great first story and a wonderfully written, very erotic story. I look forward to reading each chapter as it comes out. I thank you for your time and effort in writing this story.

Jerry Sr.Jerry Sr.over 19 years ago
Great Story

A great story keep up the good work. I look for the next chapter as soon as I get in.

Nightowl22Nightowl22over 19 years ago
GREAT!

Love this story. Fun and sensual. Jack is going to die the happiest man on earth---and so young, too.

He has so much on his plate that I'm wondering what his final course will be.

kate2112kate2112over 19 years ago
Very Hot

This is compulsive reading

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