by JackKeith
from a lurker....thank you for taking the time to share
such a fun exciting and story
Read this at work and had to go get off after every chapter. It was good.
This story gets better and better with each succeeding chapter.The next chapter is the first thing I look for when I log on.
This is a great first story and a wonderfully written, very erotic story. I look forward to reading each chapter as it comes out. I thank you for your time and effort in writing this story.
A great story keep up the good work. I look for the next chapter as soon as I get in.
Love this story. Fun and sensual. Jack is going to die the happiest man on earth---and so young, too.
He has so much on his plate that I'm wondering what his final course will be.