All Comments on 'Mister Jack Miller Ch. 06'

This ia a very good story but this lad is going to have to land somewhere soon. This flitting all over is wearing ME out! So what will he do--have a harem?

He has 5 beautiful women he can screw anytime he wishes and he's quite rich? How many more terrible things can happen to him?

I'm beginning to wonder just what Wendy has to do with anything now.

loved it from chapter 1. your fans want more. more i tell you, more

Keep writing like this Jack, people seem to be enjoying it immensely. I certainly am!

Thank you for the word about patience at the beginning. I think it was rewarding for the wait. You do need a proof reader (not me)to help with spelling but I did enjoy reading your story. Keep up the good work.

Only just picked this one up, and other than a couple of times with the wrong name, am enjoying the story line completely. My autocorrect is making this work well with your writing style and prose. 5 star all the way so far