All Comments on 'Mistletoe and Wine'

This deserved at least 7 stars.

I noticed no flaws, so many thanks to you and your editor.

Anal belongs in Gay.

very enjoyable read, thanks for the hard work!

More build up to them becoming loves would have been better

THe bit about her being on birth control spoiled it would have been better him comming deep up inside her unprotected pussy

Great story, a little mawkish towards the end but good nevertheless.

Enjoyed the story. There were a few spelling errors but nothing that detracted from my enjoyment of the story.

Thanks for sharing the story.

Some of the narrative was chopped/awkward in places, but the storyline was complete and you did a good job of mixing the physical with the emotional sides of their relationship. You even had a twist, to sorts, when Fred's mom kissed him and held him close during the dance. I thought you'd lead us to them connecting, but you pivoted in a different direction. Well done on that...

PS: the cabin is ‘homey,’ I assume.

Quite the opposite of ‘homely.’

I doubt there's a state where what Fred & Bobbie did was legal. However I liked the story so much I had to give it a 4. A small mistake here & there i not ruin it.

v v good

Sometimes, that's all that matters. Beautiful story. Thank you for sharing it with us :)

This is the first Long story I've read. An l loved it. Great job!

Well developed story, very thoughtful.

Uhhh talking about others while having an intimate moments is a hard turn-off for me overall nice

I have often thought that if it is consensual,the most beautiful love, and making love as wife and husband,is between a sister and brother.Who can love u more than that ?The only problem is the problem of consanguinite. I have known 3 couples (sister/brother) ,with 2 having normal children,and one having 2 handicapped children.

@Tiku21: Same with me. I'm not jealous of previous lovers, but IT DOES NOT make me hot to think about my woman having sex with someone else, quite the opposite. Apart from a low percentage (I guess) of men who are getting off that way it, might be a female fantasy, allowing women to fuck around with every Tom, Hairy and Dick, without feeling guilty for betraying a huband/ boyfriend.

Other than that this a satisfying read, thank you very much for sharing!