All Comments on 'Mistress Melissa Is Broken'

This was a story of revenge, not BDSM. Dissapointed. No redemption. No caring. And I couldn't buy it.

and she proved it and borrowing every pence she could then taking a check to bring her up to nothing owed the tax people but no assets to do anything futher in the field.

Since they are doing the American Porn Industry films, why are they in the UK. The US does not have an inland tax service and many other English English phrases.

Would have been good to have focused more on the reversal of her fortunes.

Giving each former victim a paragraph or two to get even, maybe a slight glimmer of hope that things could get better.

For anyone that is interested I was imagining and inspired by the porn star Melissa Lauren when I was writing this story. If you are into hardcore porn then you should check out some of her stuff, she's a smart, vicious, nasty girl and has done some fantastic domination scenes. I then saw her being totally dominated in a film and let my imagination run wild as to what I would have done if I was directing her. To be truthful I would have liked to have been even more extreme in my description of what I would have like to have done!!

Another superb story. your stories always get my pussy so wet and have so much

fun imagining myself in there.

cant wait for another installment in this one and the others.

thanks

Rachel

god you have to wright another about mel and kelly

Can't wait to read about her next film!

please you gotta wright another one i read this all the time i need more

I have read and re read your story, I think it shows how extreme BDSM should be done! It just gets better every time I read it!

Words can't describe how fantastic this is. More stories with plots like this please

Great story, incredibly hot. This story is crying out for a second part! :)

Hair grows back, welts and bruises fade, tattoos get removed and nothing in this mess convinced me she was ever broken. A decent plan solves the cash problem and she moves on. I think she comes back at them for some serious revenge down the line. They were about as smart as a stump. This was just plain bad.

WOW. Every element of this is so fucking perfect