All Comments on 'Mistress of the Mansion'

I get disappointed when i read your stories because now i have too wait for another to appear, write more often your stories are great!

Lusty,

This is one of your hottest stories ever! I love how all your main characters have such sexual appetites. What a delightful sexual romp and a great read!

duddle

Just like so many of your stories,it was really great!!!! I sure would like to read more on this story and more sub white women serviceing big beautiful black ladies!!!! Keep up the great writing !!!! Jimbo.jimac3669@hotmail.com

Once again you have topped the others. Always good, always hot, can't wait for more of Kimberly and Rita

This wasn't that well-written a story - the dialog was very stilted and unnatural and the characters were dead on arrival. It was, at best, a very basic effort. Let's save the raves for more deserving stories!

The word "black" was used almost 60 times; we got it the first time. All in all, it was fairly standard fare with nothing special.

when i read your submission's I CAN"T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE

Can`t wait to read more about their fantastic adventure. It is great reading and the interracial aspect is wonderful, ask one that knows.......I have been living such a relationship for years now and can`t find anything better and more beautiful

damn good story

Although you still have minor spelling glitches, this was one of your better efforts. Lots of heat, good amount of raunch - don't worry about the nasty comments. I think perhaps the point of "black" being used overmuch is valid, but it didn't bother me too much.

I have one curiosity as I've been reading your work - many of your lesbian characters seem to be dominant. Have you written anything were there's an equal, loving partnership? Or post-seduction, where they become a happy couple? Lots of fun there.

Keep it up!

I loved reading your stories. Wish there was a real place like that in my area! lol

Work on your spelling, stop making the color of their skin a big issue, and use some more detail. All in all, it was good though. Need to make a follow up.

simply orgasmic.

you got my mouth watering....

please make more!!!!!!

I love it keep going

LustyLee77

My girlfriend Nichelle, is a beautiful black dominant woman, with a sadistic side. When we go to one of the Lesbian clubs in town. Nichelle, tells our waitress that Linda will lick any and every pussy in the bar, for free. So yes I do like this story, please continue...

lynda.pussy.licker.

I very much liked this story although it felt kind of rushed, I felt like you could spread it out more and make more chapters, even so it was a good story that I enjoyed reading.

you have got to carry on with more adventures, you can not stop now.

I absolutely love this story...it is the best! Especially Kimberly TOTALLY submitting to Nadine. Thank you.

Excellent. Sequel, please. Wow, what a story!