All Comments on 'Mix It Up!'

by motherhen

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Tigr2Tigr2almost 5 years ago
Who is Who?

Finally gave up trying to visualize the picture you were creating. Frequent use of the wrong name and typos prevented enjoying the story. Great premise, by less than stellar execution.

screedbearscreedbearover 4 years ago
Disagree

There may have been problems but it wasn't that bad.

I made a mess if that means anything.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
HOT!

I thoroughly enjoyed the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow!

The story with everything I’ve wanted to read! Love the description! Love the enthusiastic, free-spirited characters! Love the docking! Please continue this or write more stories like this! (And if you could throw in some water sports, that would be amazing!)

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