All Comments on 'Miz Sara Goes on Maneuvers'

by FrancisMacomber

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tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
WHEN MIZ SARA STEPS TO THE PLATE

the relief pitcher better start warming up. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awesome as usual!

I love these little tales of Miz Sara's adventures.

Maybe it would be nice to tell a little story of her youth??

Tazz317 - Fuck me dead mate, just shut the fuck up!!!!!!!

MarvinSMarvinSover 12 years ago
Miz Sara

Miz Sara is one of my favorite characters. I hope to read more.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 12 years ago
Another Dixie Fried, Tame Little Tale for the Geritol Crowd !

Dont get me wrong this stuff is harmless if read or written at it's current rate of every few monts . I confess to enjoying the military metaphors. There's actually potential in these characters.. The author prefers to keep his plot transparent & get by on aforementioned surface charm. Four Stars ****

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
♥ Miz Sara ♥

Miz Sara stories are a breath of fresh air. Thanks!

bruce22bruce22over 12 years ago
Miz Sara is fun!

The stories are interesting enough even though they are not great lit. It is nice to read something that is enjoyable. This one could have hurt someone who was cheated on....

cpetecpeteover 12 years ago
Another winner

Well done and enjoyable tale. Always look forward to your byline and great stories

Rob ConnerRob Connerover 12 years ago
I Just Loves Miz Sarah!

Good Tale. More, More!!!

daveftworthdaveftworthover 12 years ago
Great series

I so enjoy the Miz Sara stories. Great Job!

jiminabjiminabover 12 years ago
I just love this series

Super enjoyable gentle reads. Thank you for them all author and for the ones that we have yet to see. Jim

DanielQSteele1DanielQSteele1over 12 years ago
If Agatha Christie posted on LIT

I think the result would be something like the Miz Sara stories. Short, sweet, well written and well plotted, the stories take an English Drawing Room approach to infidelity and adultery and cheating and lying. All very civilized,which is actually more realistic than a lot of the stories that run here. And yet, there is a sting in their tail because we're still dealing with hearts being broken. A very good series. AND if anyone is interested in another series that ran here, another volume in WWWM - "Second Acts" - including a good amount of new material - is now available from Barnes and Noble.

db1044db1044over 12 years ago
Looking Forward

Miz Sara is a wonderful character. You REALLY need to develop a full length novel (or better yet, a series).

Saxon_HartSaxon_Hartover 12 years ago
great job

I have to hand it to you for writing a wonderful BTB tale from a new viewpoint. Now I'm gonna have to read more of your catalog. Once again thank you for a good story.

OldHidekiOldHidekiover 12 years ago
I am really enjoying the Miz Sara series

Please, please... Keep adding more stories. Thank You.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great Read

Please keep them coming. Truly a joy to read

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wonderful story.

Well developed characters without overwriting them. And Miz Sara is one of my favorites. Pleasse: more stories.

DawnzoDawnzoover 12 years ago
5 STARS!!

Love Miz Sara and Marcy:)

rjordanrjordanover 12 years ago
Outstanding

Great story telling and Miz Sara is such a terrific character I wish I knew her.

VulcezVulcezover 12 years ago
I always look forward to a new story by FrancisMacomber

Great story. Another winner!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More! More!

I love your Miz Sara stories. There are always believable problems AND solutions and the ending is usuallu upbeat.

Keep writing about Miz Sara and I'm sure many people will continue reading your stories.

oldwayneoldwayneover 12 years ago
Sic Semper Cozeners.

May cheaters always have the same fate. Thank you for the story.

chytownchytownover 12 years ago
Wonderful Story!!!

Thanks for a very entertaining story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
You just keep churning out winners!

Thanks for another enjoyable experience.

PaulHayabusaPaulHayabusaover 12 years ago
Great one Francis!

DanielQSteele1,

edit your profile and put all information about WWWM series there.U can do your adversiment without worries there.

demantoiddemantoidover 12 years ago
Wonderfully clever and wonderfully well written.

I thoroughly enjoyed your story Francis...thank you.

Huedogg2Huedogg2over 12 years ago
another great story

but then I wouldn't expect any less from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
i dunno y this story in literotica?

this story sucks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great series

5 star effort, thanks for submitting

TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 12 years ago
Admittedly less erotic than a lot on this site -

But it still a Loving Wives story after all -

And the series is fun

And some of us like fun

And the author does it well -

Soooo --IMHO keep it up -

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333almost 11 years ago
Loved it

Sweet revenge for the cheating wife. Another great installment.

wanoldmanwanoldmanover 10 years ago
Wonderful series

I just found your name--the FAVORITE-- of another author. I have enjoyed reading your stories from the top down until I found Miz Sarah. Any more in the offing??

PLEEEEZE ??

Tim413413Tim413413over 9 years ago
These Miz Sara stories are very nice.

I could see them in a TV series, but I imagine the audience might get tired of two LW stories every week. I see Miz Sara has returned to serving sweet tea. Will fruit tea make a return?

sbrooks103sbrooks103over 8 years ago
Crocodile Tears

“tears streaming from her eyes.” – Once again, the cheating wife crying over the loss of the husband she despised!

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333almost 8 years ago
Second time through....

A fun one. Still five stars.

Just_WordsJust_Wordsabout 5 years ago
That was great fun!

As she said, there is always collateral damage. Neither side escapes without damage, but those who live honorably recover most easily.

jtwheelsjtwheelsabout 4 years ago
Why only 3 stars adultery not irreconcilable differences like a house you should be forced to reveal the defects

Get so tired of men not revealing the truth infidelity!

Truth is so important and yet so many hide it what a lesson to teach children etc

Truth less important than appearances or ease of divorce etc

USMC

No

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

A good one and back up to a *5 for me. Cheaters always think they’re smarter than those they’re cheating on. Most often they just ain’t

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
5 Stars

I would never tell a Lawyer how much money I Had .

NitpicNitpicabout 3 years ago
Pay

Does anyone pay her,she never asks for a retainer.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xabout 3 years ago

Why couldn't Mandy's father help her keep the house?

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xabout 3 years ago

They have to cut back on expenses, but want to go on a Mediterranean cruise?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Liked this one a lot. Miz Sara and Marcy should have a long running series bringing large cans of whoopass to cheating spouses.

I have to say, I'm glad you didn't let Peggy have the final confrontation with Jim because what could she say? So very glad I didn't have to read all the old tropes about how stupid, sorry, pleading for forgiveness and promises to make it up to you. Thanks for that FM.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

@nitpic:

Miz Sara is a lady. She would never speak of her fees in public.

NitpicNitpicalmost 2 years ago
Where

Where did Marcy reappear from?.What happened to Cindy?.

GreWulfGreWulfover 1 year ago

Nitpic

There was even another one before Cindy.

What I did was to sort all the Miz Sarah stories out in chronological order and read them that way.Made more sense.(I had the same background as Marcy :-} )

tralan69ertralan69er12 months ago

@sbrooks103x

Why couldn't Mandy's father help her keep the house?

Why couldn't you just read the story as is and not try to change things. A ridiculous question at best.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Love the Mix Sarah stories. please write some more.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Nice guys finish last (and sometimes best)

tsgtcapttsgtcapt5 months ago

Fun, sexy, light, great reading - thank you.

XluckyleeXluckylee4 months ago

5 stars from Xluckylee for a great story.

nogravynogravy3 months ago

Unique narrator and plot freshen up a cheating story. Very well done!

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