by FrancisMacomber
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I love these little tales of Miz Sara's adventures.
Maybe it would be nice to tell a little story of her youth??
Tazz317 - Fuck me dead mate, just shut the fuck up!!!!!!!
Dont get me wrong this stuff is harmless if read or written at it's current rate of every few monts . I confess to enjoying the military metaphors. There's actually potential in these characters.. The author prefers to keep his plot transparent & get by on aforementioned surface charm. Four Stars ****
The stories are interesting enough even though they are not great lit. It is nice to read something that is enjoyable. This one could have hurt someone who was cheated on....
Well done and enjoyable tale. Always look forward to your byline and great stories
Super enjoyable gentle reads. Thank you for them all author and for the ones that we have yet to see. Jim
I think the result would be something like the Miz Sara stories. Short, sweet, well written and well plotted, the stories take an English Drawing Room approach to infidelity and adultery and cheating and lying. All very civilized,which is actually more realistic than a lot of the stories that run here. And yet, there is a sting in their tail because we're still dealing with hearts being broken. A very good series. AND if anyone is interested in another series that ran here, another volume in WWWM - "Second Acts" - including a good amount of new material - is now available from Barnes and Noble.
Miz Sara is a wonderful character. You REALLY need to develop a full length novel (or better yet, a series).
I have to hand it to you for writing a wonderful BTB tale from a new viewpoint. Now I'm gonna have to read more of your catalog. Once again thank you for a good story.
Please, please... Keep adding more stories. Thank You.
Well developed characters without overwriting them. And Miz Sara is one of my favorites. Pleasse: more stories.
Great story telling and Miz Sara is such a terrific character I wish I knew her.
Great story. Another winner!
I love your Miz Sara stories. There are always believable problems AND solutions and the ending is usuallu upbeat.
Keep writing about Miz Sara and I'm sure many people will continue reading your stories.
May cheaters always have the same fate. Thank you for the story.
Thanks for another enjoyable experience.
DanielQSteele1,
edit your profile and put all information about WWWM series there.U can do your adversiment without worries there.
I thoroughly enjoyed your story Francis...thank you.
But it still a Loving Wives story after all -
And the series is fun
And some of us like fun
And the author does it well -
Soooo --IMHO keep it up -
Sweet revenge for the cheating wife. Another great installment.
I just found your name--the FAVORITE-- of another author. I have enjoyed reading your stories from the top down until I found Miz Sarah. Any more in the offing??
PLEEEEZE ??
I could see them in a TV series, but I imagine the audience might get tired of two LW stories every week. I see Miz Sara has returned to serving sweet tea. Will fruit tea make a return?
“tears streaming from her eyes.” – Once again, the cheating wife crying over the loss of the husband she despised!
As she said, there is always collateral damage. Neither side escapes without damage, but those who live honorably recover most easily.
Get so tired of men not revealing the truth infidelity!
Truth is so important and yet so many hide it what a lesson to teach children etc
Truth less important than appearances or ease of divorce etc
USMC
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A good one and back up to a *5 for me. Cheaters always think they’re smarter than those they’re cheating on. Most often they just ain’t
They have to cut back on expenses, but want to go on a Mediterranean cruise?
Liked this one a lot. Miz Sara and Marcy should have a long running series bringing large cans of whoopass to cheating spouses.
I have to say, I'm glad you didn't let Peggy have the final confrontation with Jim because what could she say? So very glad I didn't have to read all the old tropes about how stupid, sorry, pleading for forgiveness and promises to make it up to you. Thanks for that FM.
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There was even another one before Cindy.
What I did was to sort all the Miz Sarah stories out in chronological order and read them that way.Made more sense.(I had the same background as Marcy :-} )
@sbrooks103x
Why couldn't Mandy's father help her keep the house?
Why couldn't you just read the story as is and not try to change things. A ridiculous question at best.