All Comments on 'MMF Threesome'

by pixie0054

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
spelling and grammar

You need to proofread. You had form in one spot instead of from. The errors actually took away from the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
haha spelling and grammar

I guess other mistakes would be a lot more importent (not for us) but for him

PurplePlungerPurplePlungerover 5 years ago
I enjoyed the story

Thank you

I enjoyed the story. I didn't worry about the spelling or the grammar although I am an English teacher. You communicated your feelings well and that was the most important aspect.

It would be nice to read your wife's version of the encounter.

Ray RobertsRay Robertsover 5 years ago
I loved it and the hope that there was some truth in the story made it more interesting

There's nothing like a good big cocked stud pleasing the wife. It' very erotic to participate and watch your wife being pleasured. "Keep it up" is a fitting comment for the very believable tale.

ubonakubonakalmost 5 years ago
Hammy?

You wrote that you " went on Hammy and advertised our interest...". What is Hammy?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

ok . sounds like they had fun

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I can elaborate totally with this story it’s as if I have wrote it I also left the room I almost hate my self for it but have got over it I think my wife also made more noise and said different things to him that she doesn’t say or do to me but we are new to this so have to deal with it or just walk away would I go there again yeah why not you only live once

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