All Comments on 'Modern Fairy Tales Ch. 10'

i know you explained what kind of story it will be in the beginning. and I'm fully aware that probably this is quite creative - well not really since I've read plenty plots like this, but what I really hate about it, was that it wasn't even complete. you left it hanging, which might have been somewhat acceptable if the storyline required it to be so but the way you wrote this one out, it screamed for an ending. plus, it was all so hideously 'dramatic', and i was so worked up over it due to the fact i hate theatrics, but that's my own fault for not stopping when i could have. putting that aside, i still think this sucked

the ending left me a sad, even though I had suspected what was coming. No one can push us as far as family can. Well done.

Very well written although dramatic and sad.

A well written story that brought me to tears. I still wish that she wouldn't have fallen to her death. But then again I have always been a sucker for happy endings. Good job.

A well written story that brought me to tears. I wish she wouldn't have fallen to her death but then again I am a sucker for happy endings. Well done.