All Comments on 'Modern Jane Meets Tarzan Ch. 01'

Please request an editor. I couldn’t make it past the second paragraph. Like the idea.

A modern day hairy chest Tarzan-type man in the jungle would be great -- but make him a rugged man but a gentle loving man too!

This is looking good and makes me want to keep going with it. Just catching up but well written and edited. Departs from the original but it's good so far.

This story has got progressively better not from a writing stand point but from erotic and sexual. I read first chapter and was liking the prose but needed more. Other chapts have picked it up sexually. Great series overall 10!!

Enticing intro, deliciously written. Five for sure!