All Comments on 'Modern Jane Meets Tarzan Ch. 05'

by slickbox2010

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
excellent

Perhaps the best chapter yet in this excellent story, Chapter 5's flaw is its brevity.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Omg...this one soaked me. Is this written by a woman?

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotalmost 3 years ago

Another very well written chapter. The best yet.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

....swollen stretched and full..." What a visual.

I don't find this story believe-able but your labours are worth the efforts

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