All Comments on 'Modern Motherhood - Prom with Mom'

Nice one Mister! I enjoyed reading your story. A few typos, but we all make those. Well written, and I liked the pace of the relationship build-up. Bravo.

Jocasta resort - let them not get out of that resort till there is a little baby planted inside of her womb!!!

yeah one with her pregnant would be nice!

Good story but you might consider an editor. There are some words that are misused, for instance "engrossed" doesn't mean what you think it does.

Very well written! Wish I had a mom like that. More please!

5*****

I love tan lines like you mentioned earlier in the story. My mother has a great body. With tan lines, her firm tits pussy and ass really stand out brightly compared to the rest of her tanned body. I get so horny and hard seeing her like that I just have to fuck the shit out of her.

Modern Motherhood is hot, as long as the mother is attractive. I lost my virginity when I was eighteen.....

I am sort of disappointed that you are not a prolific writer because both of these stories are very good. You really have a talent for world building and I would like to see the story continue. I could see some exciting lectures at the Jocasta resort and some downtime where the mothers could get to know each other and perhaps brag about their sons. There could be exercises to strengthen the mother-son bond and romantic evenings where fantasies and role-plays could be acted out. By the way, Mom speaking in Spanish was such an erotic touch. I really loved it. If you don't choose to continue with this couple, you still should keep exploring the Modern Motherhood angle with another couple. But, I do really enjoy this one.

It's a good story but I guess after in between the buildup you introduced the nakedness pretty early, if there was more tension and desire to see each other naked was something that would add some extra beauty to the story, you have a good potential to build up the storyline. although I like the the way you described the sex between them that's your special talent and hed's off to that

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It moved a great and natural pace. Almost reminded me of my first date at ?? - with my 56 year old neighbour. No regrets

I love the idea of modern motherhood! Please write more stories of this universe.