All Comments on 'Moist Lips'

ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT ! More please , SOON !

this is really good. You have created two believable characters, neither of which I fully understand, and made me want to know more about them. You've also created a nasty hot story.

What a great story. Sensual, erotic and captivating.

She reminds me of someone I once knew. Beautiful writing.

I want more, but to end it like this is just as delicious.

Only I don't see how he can afford any of this as a part-time teacher, They make nothing. Make him have an inhertitance; also why would a graduate student be interested in him?

that you had the good sense to take that plane to Amsterdam, whatever the outcome, and built some beautiful memories. Thank you for sharing.

Your command of the English language is superb. Thank you for these stories, I love the imagery !

You have done it again...you are brilliant. Again...you’re command if the English language is ...superb..more please. I have added you as a favourite. Only just found you..06/12/2018..where have I been!!

John

You capture the intensity of desire, which is often more important than what actually happens afterwards.

Melanie. The real deal.