by marlama
I like the idea of anonymity, the promise of more if he does not turn around.
I liked this audio a lot, and I appreciate you adding the train sound effects to enhance the story, but I wish when you reached the point of speaking, you would have lowered the volume of that sound effect a bit. Just let it fade into the background. There was no need to leave it at that same volume, once you began the aural seduction.
As it was, it competed with your voice, and made it hard to hear you at times. From what I could tell, you have an amazingly sexy voice and an interesting, exotic accent, which I would have liked to have heard more clearly.
Your voice and accent made me melt. And the production was cool too. Please give us more!
not bad at all. next time take out the parts where you ask permission and make it more of just doin it.. dont give me a choice..take what you want and leave...
mostly heard the train noise and couldn't hear what she was saying,the train noise drowned her out, that being said, only 1 star.