by yesterdays
FIVE STARS!!!!!!!!
Hoping what is next is not long in cumming - pun intended.
One can almost guess; hoping the next chapter(s) are equally HOT.
So many possibilities, whatever they may entail.
She almost comes across as a dom in this relationship,, using him in a way , yet don’t really care about his feelings
James may have wondered what would happen next, but I have a pretty good idea that Mom and Dad wouldn't approve of it. :) Good story--now I'm awaiting Chapter 2.
You have to continue this! 5 Stars!! She sees like she has more experience than she admits. It would be fun to find out!!
Good start, looking forward to Molly getting fuck for the first time, and then giving herself totally to him for free use.
Great story, good premise and development. Far too heavy on the use of 'bro' in my opinion though. Looking forward to more.
Needs some minor editing but otherwise a very good story beginning needs to be finished