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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Hot Story

I enjoyed it but it was lacking in detail where it was most needed—the sexual parts!

zaxxonzaxxonover 19 years ago
Very good

I liked it. Keep writing! And keep up the titfucking!

oldwayneoldwayneabout 15 years ago
I liked it!

I thought it was a fine story. Keep more of them coming.

mzzqtmzzqtabout 15 years ago
This was a good start...

However, you need to work on your punctuation and grammar. When two people are conversing back and forth, you need separate paragraphs for each character.

This was a really good story, and I think with a little more detail, you could have a great series!

Mzzie

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I can't imagine how this lame POS got such a high score.

First off, LEARN TO FUCKING WRITE.

Secondly, LEARN TO FUCKING SPELL.

Thirdly, LEARN TO FUCKING PUNCTUATE.

Fourthly, LEARN TO FUCKING CAPITALIZE.

And, finally, LEARN TO FUCKING WRITE.

Anonymous
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